Fantastic art and stained glass in these churches. The beauty is astounding.
We were, as always, up and out early. This time we were on a mission of hope… we hoped the church would be open, as it looked too good to miss and we were meeting the girls a few miles away that morning too.
You might have thought we’d be all churched out after the marathon on Saturday, where we had visited seven of them, but each one is an adventure… you never know what you will find. What we found in Tavistock was an open door and morning prayers in progress. Withdrawing quietly, out of respect, we went for a walk through the old town, watched the birds foraging for breakfast… then tried again. This time, we were in luck.
The church of St Eustachius is one of only two dedicated to the saint in Britain. Eustachius was a Roman soldier who converted to Christianity in the second century…
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Fascinating article. History holds so many questions…
Leaving the church, we gathered in the little garden beside it which, so the church’s Keeper of the Keys would later tell us, had been sold to them for the princely sum of £1, with the sole proviso that the garden be used. Beside its gate is another fragment of the old Abbey, bearing once again the symbol of St Catherine’s wheel… which seemed fairly appropriate considering what we were about to do.
The gardens are a beautiful and peaceful spot, tucked under the wing of the church. The air is fragrant with the perfume of herbs and old roses. Apples grow on carefully tended trees and there are bees and butterflies in abundance. We gathered around a small, paved square lined with benches to start the next part of our adventure.
We had been convinced to hold a workshop at Cerne Abbas because of a feeling and a…
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- Once you set up the platform design, it is so easy to revise and edit your outline.
- It is very easy to move individual chapters around either in the storyboard itself or
- By moving the chapter slides on the left side of the page as you revise your story
- I love to highlight important elements within the chapters using different colors.
- Once you are satisfied with each chapter outline, or slide, print it out for viewing.
- I keep my outlines in a binder for quick reviewing.
Life Lyrics ©2020
Her mind-numbing life
her relentless job
ringing up groceries
him sauntering up
slapping down a pack of gum
winking at her
with a bold brown eye
her blue eyes fluttering
him licking his lips
making his move
Metallic blue eyeliner
lips the color of a bruise
thinking he knows her type
Now she’s gone and done it
caught his eye
she looks younger than she is
sweet youth, dewy-eyed
an object of desire and jealousy
vulnerable at times
but she is a keen observer
of sly grins and brown eyes
knows the pitfalls and potholes
most often desperate
He is not her dream
but he is here
drawing her in
she’s been here before
on the losing end
He promises everything
gives her nothing
but a single drawer
and crumpled sheets
covers her with hot kisses
While she tastes
his lying breath
He wants more
always more of her
brown eyes slant
his lantern jaw tight
a curl of fists
She is caught
against a wall
biting her lip
Her hands shaking
she covers bruises
fingers to swollen lips
She smooths the cheap
yellow dress he bought
listens for his steps
knows the odds
are against her
praying he’s forgotten
his black mood
with every beat of her heart
He sneers a grin
pulls at her
hands hard against
her blue veined skin
breathless she awaits
She’s saved cash
a fist full of crumpled green
enough to take her
away from him.
The grimy bus windows
fogged with gray rain
reflect a ghost
her backpack with
everything she owns
caught between her
the miles passing
with every beat of her heart.
Julia Blake has crafted a story, not only rich in details, but equally rich in the characters you wish were your friends. The story begins as a coming of age story of a lonely young girl neglected by her self-obsessed parents, and who suffered unimaginable bullying at school. The one constant good thing in the girl’s life was her grandmother who gave her the love she so desperately needed. When her grandmother dies, she bequeaths her considerable fortune and her beautiful old home to her granddaughter. This is the catalyst that jump starts the girl on her road to transformation.
However, it would take more than money for this lonely girl to begin to believe in herself. It was a vision, a moment out of time, that Phyllis glimpsed what her future self could be. From that moment on, she steadfastly went about changing herself into the vision she’d glimpsed. And that future girl’s name was Lili. Lili was elegant, self-assured and surrounded by dear friends.
Her own lonely, beleaguered past filled the new Lili with insight into others’ desires and loneliness. Like a magnet, Lili drew these disparate people to her. Their problems, loves and trials became hers. And they became devoted to her. They became the family she never had.
One night, at an engagement party for a friend, Lili meets a man who she instantly feels is the love of her life. She is crushed to find him already married. Lili has never had a boyfriend, never been in love, yet she loves this man with a woman’s heart. She tried to forget him, though time and circumstance brought them together again and again. Their mutual attraction binds them, yet Lili refuses to be the catalyst that destroys a marriage, even a marriage that is hollow and full of lies.
This is a remarkable story of love and sacrifice; a story of friends who become a family; a story of love lost and found again. This is the kind of story that resonates long after the last word is read. I totally fell in love with this wonderful novel. It’s the kind of novel you will read again and again.
HOW TO WRITE UNFORGETTABLE ENDINGS
Five Rules for Choosing an Ending:
1-An ending should seem inevitable without seeming predictable
2-An ending should be satisfying to the reader, that is, it makes sense.
3-An ending should be unforgettable.
4-An ending is not about what happens, but how it happens. Loose ends should be resolved in a meaningful way.
5-The ending should illuminate the context and characters in the story.
How to Choose an Ending:
Writers spend hours if not days agonizing over how to end a novel, when basically, there are only 5 possible endings! This is based on your protagonist being happy, unhappy or have changed what he or she wanted or didn’t want.
1-Happy: The protagonists sets out to accomplish what she desires and succeeds. She’s happy.
2-Unhappy: The protagonist gets what she wants but decides it doesn’t make her happy.
3-Happy: The protagonist doesn’t get what he wants. Still, he is happy because he got something unexpected, something he likes better.
4-Unhappy: The protagonist doesn’t get what she wants because of her own flaws. Such as, she doesn’t realize until it is too late what she has lost forever, her true love.
5-Neither happy or unhappy: The protagonist changes his mind about what he wants and is content to keep searching for what he wants, or sacrifices what he wants for someone, or something else.
Endings to Avoid at all Costs:
1-The No-ending Ending: This is when the story ends without explanation. The writer makes the reader guess. Ugh. No one likes this ending.
2-The Twilight Zone Ending: The writer doesn’t compose an ending that evolves out of conflicts the characters face; instead, the writer slaps on a twist ending, a contrivance.
Synopsis from Fiction First Aid, by Raymond Obstfeld
Mystery abounds in this fresh and exciting YA novel, which is the first book in the series to come. Young Josh Taylor has been sent to live in the town of Blackbirch with his mother’s best friend, after the car accident that took his parents’ lives. Part of the mystery is that Josh suffers from a sort of amnesia which keeps much of his memories hazy. Though he doesn’t know why.
Blackbirch is a touristy town that heralds a reputation of being a location for witchcraft and magick. His mother’s friend, Grace, owns a store dealing in spell books, candles, herbs and other magical items. Eve, who believes in magick, and Sarah, who doesn’t, are Josh’s friends. Josh doesn’t pay attention to any of it until he touches a magical item and then power he doesn’t understand shoots through him.
To add to these circumstances, a girl named Kallie, who only comes to him in his dreams, warns him of impending danger and a sinister presence. Josh is driven to find the answers to his questions. And some mysterious force keeps drawing him deep into the woods toward a house that he’s told doesn’t exist. The mysteries keep mounting. What really happened to his parents? What caused the car accident. Why can’t he remember so many things. Who can he trust?
The world building is terrific. Blackbirch is a town we’d all be fascinated by, a place we’d all want visit. The books ends with us needing to read the next in the series to get our own questions answered. This is a clean, and a true young adult book, though all ages will enjoy the premise. KM Allan has crafted an intriguing and mysterious story with more to come.
Five stars for this wonderful foray into the world of a dog with its human. Sue Vincent, the human in question, carves rhyming sentences into sweet and often comic vignettes.
I’m a dog lover so I was drawn to a book all about Ani, a photogenic doggy. I love all of her incredible expressions. What’s more amazing is Ani’s story is done entirely in verse, rhyming verse, no less. It’s a delightful read all about Ani and her human’s daily adventures. If you are a dog lover, like me, you’ll want to read this well told story.
Happy Doggerel reading.